Friday, October 12, 2007

1 Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the
basis. [a change]
Resumptive
Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the
basis, and education which is the responsibility of school systems.
Summative
Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the
basis, a change that the education organization look into again.
Free
Many different school systems are making a return to traditional education in the
basis, making us considerthe differences between traditional and modern education.
2 Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manyfactures have been
trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements.[a challenge]
Resumptive
Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manyfactures have been
trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements, requirement that
becomes harder and harder to meet.
Summative
Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manyfactures have been
trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements, a challenge that
many automobile manufactures have to face.
Free
Within the period of the last few years or so, automobile manyfactures have been
trying to meet new and more stringent quality control requirements, helping us
develop more high quality products.

3 The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an
understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced
during the Great Depression.[a failure]
Resumptive
The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an
understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced
during the Great Depression, insecurity which is no longer existing in recent years.
Summative
The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an
understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced
during the Great Depression, a failure that makes young people don't know what the
exact meaning of it.
Free
The majority of young people in the world of today cannot even begin to have an
understanding of the insecurity that a large number of older people had experienced
during the Great Depression, resulting the young people never have sense of crisis.

4 The reasons for the cause of aging are a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for
millennia.[a mystery]
Resumptive
The reasons for the cause of aging are a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for
millennia, and the puzzle encourage physiologist to work on.
Summative
The reasons for the cause of aging are a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for
millennia, a mystery that the nature order the world.
Free
The reasons for the cause of aging are a puzzle that has perplexed humanity for
millennia, eliminating old and giving birth to new generation.

5 The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryos has raised many
issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople.
Resumptive
The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryos has raised many
issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople,
and the issues that will be argued in many years.
Summative
The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryos has raised many
issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople,
an event thaat is a milestone in the human history.
Free
The successful accomplishment of test-tube fertilization of embryos has raised many
issues of an ethical nature that continue to trouble both scientists and laypeople,
giving hope to women who can't be pregnant.

6 Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalledd when Darwin
put forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as
apes.
Resumptive
Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalledd when Darwin put
forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as apes,
abd the suggestion that is too weird and desrepectful for people to accept in that
period.
Summative
Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalledd when Darwin put
forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as apes,
a theory that is acknowledged universally as evolution.
Free
Many who lived during the period of the Victorian era were appalledd when Darwin put
forth the suggestion that their ancestry might have included creatures such as apes,
causing parts of people to consider the origin of human.

7 In the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in
affluence and stability in the area of political affairs had the consequence of
allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together.
Resumptive
In the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in
affluence and stability i the area of political affairs had the consequence of
allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together, and the
Renaissance which is a revolution of science artistic, emerging in Italia in the 14th
century.
SummativeIn the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in
affluence and stability i the area of political affairs had the consequence of
allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together, an event
that opened prologue of the modern European history.
Free
In the period known to scholars and historians as the Renaissance, increases in
affluence and stability i the area of political affairs had the consequence of
allowing streams of thought of different kinds to merge and flow together, considered
a dividing line of the middle ancient and modern times.

8 The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of
news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only
gossip of a salacious and sexual nature.
Resumptive
The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of
news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only
gossip of a salacious and sexual nature, and the focus may cause medias more
attention than ever before.
Summative
The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of
news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only
gossip of a salacious and sexual nature, a change that affects and form a new
attitude of journalists to this kind of materials.
Free
The field of journalism has to an increasing degree placed its focus on the kind of
news stories and events that at one time in our history were considered to be only
gossip of a salacious and sexual nature, extending and expanding the audience's view
and opinions.

9 In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moores has put the spotlight on
the American penchant for violence.
Resumptive
In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moores has put the spotlight on the
American penchant for violence, Bowling for Columbine that have an extremely bad
influence.
Summative
In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moores has put the spotlight on the
American penchant for violence, a focus that causes the nation's attention of
personal behavior in America now.
Free
In his documentary Bowling for Columbine, Michael Moores has put the spotlight on the
American penchant for violence, attracting psychologists to do some relative
reasearch.

10 Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in reponse to
global warming.
Resumptive
Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in reponse to
global warming, and global warming which is also worth to be focused by the world.
Summative
Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in reponse to
global warming, a phenomenon that alarm people the consequence of destructing
enviroment.
Free
Al Gore has tirelessly urged world governments to develop policies in reponse to
global warming, deserved more support and encrouge from the world.

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